Pink sky, hazy sun,
It’s a beautiful day,
Life, I want to take a run,
When would be another such May
Orange sky, yellow sun and its merciless heat,
But greater fire inside me,
Life is unfolding, am upbeat,
Towards the sun, here I flee
Blue sky, red sun half hidden behind horizon
People going home, while I fly
There are miles to be covered a several ton
And without rest, going on I would try
Purple sky, moon glowing in sun’s reflection
And I don’t want to close my eyes
Life is for real, or is it illusion
Don’t want to dream, that shows me truth, these were all lies
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Ha! How ironic that I also happened to post my first poem on the same day! Yours is a million times better of course! 🙂
That can’t be the case. You according to me are amongst the best writers of our class, or frankly arguably the best. Anyway, give me ur url……..
its amazing yaar…really good…
Thanks bhooms :), glad amongst my closest friends at school was amongst the firsts to read it 🙂
Great Poem Yaar!
Thank you so much rakesh 🙂
Hey, good one natasha…creativity oozing out of u right now, u should try writing a text also, sometime plain text is more difficult to write than a poem !! 🙂
Hey, nice to get approval from a wonderful writer herself 🙂 Sure, will write a prose soon 🙂
hey buddy….
this is an awesome one!!! so rythemic n yet so real… cld sense d feelings n d dreams… keep going n let me be updated wid d new ones…. 🙂
Hey Shaheen,
So cool you liked it, and yeah will keep updating, and also expecting comments from you every time 😉 . It was very encouraging, thank you 🙂
life is an illusion until u r into kaam , krodh , madh, moha, lobh or else real
good poem, xpecting more 2 come
1 dialogue seekh liya hai, u try to put it everywhere. Already gave it a like on fb, but pls no repetition! Thanks waise 🙂
Sky is clear, shining blue with golden rays…
Or, is smeared drenching damp with black clouds…
Meet monster pink, orange, blue, purple or full bays…
Your prince will appear in purple light, God will utter hymns loud…
All the best Natasha…
Thank you
Great yaar !
Where was this art hidden gal?
The composition is so good, real and profound.
All the best dear …
hey dj,
your compositions provided motivation :), thank u 🙂